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Old March 16th, 2004, 10:57 PM   #45
kathe nichols
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brede, "magnetic" does fit with the rhythm, but I'd prefer to keep the specific metaphor of love (umm... ok, lust) as gravity.

The subject of the poem liked it, so I guess that's as good as I can expect. It's not as if I'm writing enough these days to be worth trying to publish!
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